Fifty Queries Club #10

Prologue Redux

Hi Friends,

Let’s talk about some queries and sample pages, shall we? If you’re new here, this is the subscribers-only Fifty Queries Club, and if you want to join in, go here.

Today we’re talking about D’s book, an 86k word work of fantasy about Hell. In D’s version, our main character finds herself there unexpectedly, along with everyone else who happen…